Thursday, March 10, 2011

Persuading Essay

 I am representing my company Art Over the World, and I have a new product called the Colr Brush. The commercial for the Colr Brush would be good for right after the 3:00 news. I think that it would be more appropriate after the news because at three o'clock is when children come out of school. The Colr Brush paint is non-toxic and safer for children than any other existing paints. The product appeals more to younger consumers more than older.  The Colr Brush is a brush that has buttons where you press them and fresh paint squirts onto the brush. There is a small button where you can have the buttons locked so if you press a button by accident paint doesn't come out. There is also a button where you press it and water cleans the brush, so you're ready to paint right away! It is much easier than having to dip it in water over and over again. I think it would be a great thing if you put it on.

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1 comment:

  1. I agree, the colr brush is more appealing to younger than olders. Sometimes older kids arent into some of the things they used to love in art. It doesnt matter what age i am i love painting. I love the idea where when your done with a paint your can lock it and not make a mess. With my paintings im always making a mess. The water idea is amazing. I get sick and tired of dipping and dipping over and over again. Finally, there is a solution to this. GOOD JOB !

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